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A crunch with each step,
Sounds dismally from the snow,
Almost like it lacks the will...
To fight back…
Or any will at all.

Pale flakes descend from the clouds,
As you just continue onwards.
“Keep moving,” an automated thought,
“perhaps it will distract from the pain.”
Perhaps…

You feel like crumpling in a heap,
Like giving in and diminishing into the ground.
You feel like falling to your knees,
Like weeping until your tears turn to ice,
Becoming chilled jewels in the barren field of white.

Voices seem to call out,
Either from your mind or the bitter wind...
It’s difficult to tell.
They speak of past sorrows and tales,
Words meant for a eulogy, not conversation.

Long brown hair blows across your face,
As you just trek on into a bleak abyss,
Following the sounds of fate into the mist,
A fantasy of such grave proportions,
If one would call it that.

The horizon is nearly empty,
The exception being a lone, charred tree.
Standing in the foggy distance,
so sympathetically, a woeful sight.
Yet only one to show perspective, not to change it.

Your vision blurs, the glimmer of the sun dims.
As your body involuntarily begins to give in,
Your heart then begins to number its struggled beats.
The cycle then starts to close…
as the barred gates of your mind begin to open.

You can feel yourself collapsing,
Each breath you take makes you shudder more than the last...
A silence more ominous than that in a casket follows,
As your thoughts begin to slow,
And surreal images flood your mind.

They flow through your thoughts,
Like a thread delicately being woven,
Into such an immaculate piece of cloth.
Taming the viciousness that is your consciousness.
Bringing you to a settling peace…

A pear blue sea is all that is visible,
Stretching out all the way to the lucid horizon.
Ripples flow from beneath your bare feet,
With such meaningful tranquility.
A gasp escapes your phantasmal lips as you glance upwards,
And see every single star in the sky,
Each planet, each nebulae, each strange glow...
Each shard of mystifying darkness.
Every piece of existence seems to fall into place…
Things change, and hide… the unexplainable all in one prospect,
The visage of perfection.
Each visible aspect more beautiful than the last.
Each calming the beast of doubt.
And soothing eternity…
©2006-2009 ~Malefictarium
:iconmalefictarium:

Author's Comments

something i wrote at 2 in the morning, had troubles sleeping and a few things lodged in teh far corners of my mind... this is a tad of it which i managed to scrape out. it origionally was around 4 pages long written but i cut off alot because it has some personal things woven into the lines that i would prefer to keep to myself.

all work copyright kurt buhler 2006. [=Malefictarium]

note: its late again and i prolly need to edit it more, but thats for tomorrow.

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:iconzephyrbreez:
wow.

y'know... only the best of the best sticks to the paper at 2 am.
:iconmalefictarium:
thx.

i is agree.

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the little vampire bit me on my toe... bastard... :shakefist:
:iconsoftcell72:
thoise middle of the night writings are always the best.
I love the descriptiveness, not so much a death as a giving up of will.

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change is good, you go first.
Light travels faster than sound, which is why a person can appear bright, until they open their mouth.
hating me won't make you pretty.
:iconmalefictarium:
thanks. i just dont like the charred tree thing because to me it seems like such a cliche. but whatever. ill change it up later lol.

about 99% of my literature is based on imagery that gets stuck in my head.. or in some cases my visual representation of perfection. somewhere i would rather be than where i am now.. this probally has a few subliminal things thrown in that has to do with my fear of death/the afterlife. but yeah

descriptiveness is my bag. lol.

beh i need to find a way to get more comments on poetry :hmm:

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the little vampire bit me on my toe... bastard... :shakefist:
:icondivinity-bliss:
Wow. Amazing.

:clap:

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BIENVENIDOS A MIS PANTALONES!
Te amo con todo mi alma y corazón, pero solamente por cinco minutos. Pero por diez dólares, te amo toda la noche :eyes:
Go to ~writers-in-progress it's awsum!
:iconmalefictarium:
Thank you. :nod:

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the little vampire bit me on my toe... bastard... :shakefist:
:iconduende01:
The narration helps to ease into the poem and the imagery becomes more striking, especially in the last stanza. The language you use is so rich that it's amazing. Rock on.

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For she was all that was left when they'd sifted
Through industy's ashes for unspent souls.
:iconalians07:
thats amazing with nice effects...

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{{| I will be back |}}
:iconmalefictarium:
Thank you very much.

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the little vampire bit me on my toe... bastard... :shakefist:

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